Saturday, May 25, 2013

Journal 28 My Tell-Tale Ending

The sound was getting louder and louder and louder.., "didn't they hear that? or they are just keep making jokes on me, oh my god, I think they probably knew this already, what should I do now? should I stand up?, should I confess? I don't know what should I do now" but he told himself to calm down, do not let himself looks so insane and terrible, he went and get some wine, and sat one the chair, he was trying to make the police leave his home, but they didn't even bother him, they kept drinking, talking and laughing, he couldn't stand anymore, he walked to his bedroom, grabbed some poison, and then he put it into a bottle of wine, he added more into polices' glass, the one he already put some poison in.
Suddenly every polices started shaking their body, they started to feel cold, and then they fall down, one by one by one, he started to laugh, he walked besides the window, and smiled, he let the wind brush his face, deep breath and then he jumped out of it...
He screamed and yelled, he found that he held his bed firmly, he opened his eyes, he found out that, it is just a creepy dream that he's never had.

Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Journal 27 Hints and Foreshadowing

In the story, the main character kept saying that he is nervous, especially when he killed the old man who with the pale blue eyes, he seems very calmly, he could calmly to tell the whole story, it makes him look insane and scary.
He could also hear the sounds that come from everywhere, even heaven and hell, the whole story makes me feel nervous and scared when i was reading it, and I cant really know that if he was talking a true story or he was just lying to everyone who was reading the story, I think its just all made by himself, he seems very scary and crazy, that's why it makes he become an unreliable narrator.
I havent read the books that has the unreliable narrators, but after reading this story, the unreliable narrators seems very cool, and he seems that he almost the main character in the story.

Sunday, May 19, 2013

Journal 26 Unreliable Narrator

There are a lot of kinds of narrator, the one of my favorite kind is unreliable narrator, the unreliable narrators always make me feel excited, and very interested in the story, because they are usually very crazy and insane, they don't really even know what they are really doing and thinking, and they will keep lying to the readers.
I like to read the stories that is mystery, i think those stories are so cool, and of course, in the real world, there are a lot of unreliable person, sometimes its really hard to recognize that the it the person is saying the truth or not, sometimes i will think about the things that the person did before, if the person who likes to lie to everyone, then most of the stories and things that he says, people seldom will trust him, or maybe the person who always say the different kinds of things to different kinds of people.
I don't like the person like that in the real world, but i like to see them in the story, because most of the time they always make the story become very interesting and cool.

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Journal 25 Scary Stories

Have you ever heard of any scary stories or thriller movie? I don't even dare to watch and read those things, those are so scary to me.
Im actually afraid of the dolls that with big eyes, the dolls are just same with the movie that is called "Child plays", the dolls inside are so scary, with a big blue and scary eyes, Im scared of those dolls when Im in the dark room alone, or see them at night, I feel so bad when someone is keep looking at me, and with a scary smile at night, makes me feel insecure.
There is one more reasons that why Im scared of the doll with big eyes, because I did hear the summary of the movie and the pictures of the movie too, so those things make me don't even dare to have one or look at them.
I have tried to accept the dolls like that before, I was trying to accept the things that I am scared of, but it is still too hard for me to accept that, this is the thing that I am really scared, how bout you?

Saturday, May 11, 2013

Journal 24 Suspicion

Something that happened or the situation will make you feel strange and uncomfortable, it might let you want to get out of there.
If I be in the place, that is dark, and there are a few people are smoking and chewing some gums, with tattoos, and evil smile, also im alone, wind is keep brushing my face, no one looks nice and friendly there, and those people seems keep closing you, keep making a circle and try o surround you, I will defiantly feel so bad and want to get out of there, or maybe will scream as loud as i can.

sometimes the situation is very scary that you cant even imagine, those situation will make you keep shaking and feel very uncomfortable, like you are trying to get out of there, but it seems like it will be very hard to leave, even you try so hard to think the way to get out of there,and why the situation will make a person feel so bad, is because that, those people don't really look so normal, they smoke, have some tattoos, evil face, many different kinds of action will make a person get scared, especially when those people keep trying to close you and surround you, it must be the most scary part.

Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Journal 23 What's worth the effort?

I don't think that Squeaky thinks it's worth to take good care of his brother,Raymond,she might be very tired of keeping her eye on him,and have to keep protecting his brother, because, Raymond is often laughed by somebody, so she needs to stand out and protect him.
Especially the time when his brother Raymond makes some mistakes or got into some troubles, she has to help him and solve the problems that he makes, or she might be blamed by her parents, so she might often have to burden the sin that Raymond makes.
Just like my twin sisters, I have to take care of them,too, but this is a tired things to do, if you didn't help them or tell them to correct their mistakes, sometimes the person who will be blamed must be you, my sisters are naughty and childish, taking care of them is tired, but sometimes you will think it is not that tired, you can enjoy the course when you taking care of them, keeping eye on them might make you feel mad when they keep making mistakes, sometimes i don't think it is worth for me to do these things for them, but finally you will find out, everything isn't that worse.

Saturday, May 4, 2013

Journal 22 The Resolution

Every things just died, all the plants and flowers never grown again,people started to cry,the mystery girl started to laugh out loud, her laughing just like a swamp witch, loud and sharp voice spread all over the ocean, Dylan just stood next to the mystery girl, and started to smile with a evil face.
All the people finally found out that the mystery girl and Dylan was Antherina's half-brother and sister, their mother was killed by Antherina's mother, her mother disagreed to have two queen in Terandiphia, she couldn't stand, so she made a trap and killed them.That's why they both hate Antherina so much, they wanted to kill her,to pay back,they thought someone must responded the death of their mother, even though they knew Antherina was innocent, but they didn't even care about this, the things that they realized is revenge  The mystery girl finally got the throne and the crown, they both got on the chair that they always dreamed to.
They hold their hands tightly and everything started to become dark and wither, the food and animals became smelly, the people in the town felt sleepy, they kept falling, one by one by one, the whole kingdom fall into sleep, it would never wake up, but there was still a flame in the woods
haven't be extinguished.