Journal 20 The Climax

Remember the part that have been stopped from?
Antherina was going to make a decision,the mystery girl was going to fight with Antherina,the princess of Terandiphia,suddenly she found out that her brother wasn't on her side,he was standing with the mystery girl,and they both just stared at Antherina, so she was trying to figure out what she should do. Finally, she got her own answer, she stood back and try not to start this fight, because she still owned a beautiful heart, she knew that her brother would still hurt her, even she just stood back, but in the deep of her heart, she doesn't really want to hurt her brother.
She wanted to do everything for not hurting his brother, she still remembered that her brother treated her like a little doll, always care about her, never let her cry, but she still couldn't understand that why he would be like this, he was not the boy that she knew before, she started to cry..
The fight started, a mystery girl took out her long sword and attacked her, she put the sword into Antherina's body and then pushed it into the deepest of her stomach, her brother came out and stood on her hand, told her that, the last word that she said would be his name....

Journal 19 My character

Antherina was the main character in my story, She had a long curly green hair, she got some beautiful jewels on the top of her hair, her cheek was red like an apple with big grey eyes, and a small mouth like a cherry,she couldn't live without style, she always wore yellow shirt, with some cute ribbons and some flowers on it, she had a mermaid tail, full of blue scales and green scales, her fin was purple, she always shook her fin, she must be very proud of it.
She is a nice and beautiful girl, she treated her people so well in her palace which called Terandiphia, her voice is wonderful, just like a bird singing on the branch, she smells like a red rose, when she was spinning around in the garden, the garden would be full of her smell.
She liked to help people, and she is nice to everyone, she listened to people's advice, took their advice, she had a beautiful heart.
She loved animals, she treated all the animals very nice, she often took care of them, also fed them when she was free, she was a lovely girl. And this is the introduction of my main character.

Journal 18 Rising Action

There was a mystery girl who wore a dark dress, appeared in the kingdom that called Terandiphia, it was a palace in the ocean, the mystery girl was trying to against the princess Antherina who controlled the palace in the ocean, the mystery girl wanted to knock the princess down, and then get the throne from the princess, at first, the Antherina wasn't afraid of her, she wasn't afraid of anything, she was a brave girl, until she found that her brother wasn't on her side, she saw that he just stood besides the mystery girl, and then kept staring at Antherina, her brother told her that he will beat her down and then told her that the last word that she said will be his name.
Antherina was shocked, she couldn't even believe that her brother would betray her,and hate her so much,so she became nervous,she didn't even know what should she do next,to her she didn't know what would be the right thing that she had to do, she was thinking about that she should fight with her brother and the mystery girl, or she had to stand back and try not to begin this fight?
What do you think she would do? Which one would she choose?

Journal 17 conflict

The conflict in the story is men vs men, when the mysterious girl who is in black got to the palace and she wanted to control all the things that Antherina had, so they got a fight, from this i can tell that this is men vs men, they were try to fight with each other, and they both wanted to win this fight, and then Antherina figured out that his brother stood on the dark girl's side, she felt painful and sad, she was trying to think that should she fight with her brother, or she had to let it go, from here i also can tell that this is men vs self, because, the main character didn't know that what should she choose, she had to fight with her brother and kill him or she had to stand back and try not to hurt his brother, try not to fight with them.
Every story need conflicts, if there is no conflict in the story the story might be very boring and terrible, no one will want to read these kinds of book, the conflict is very important in the story, it can makes the story become more interesting and can create a different event in the story, let the character that set in the story trying to fix it, conflict is the most important part, always make the story more and more excited.

Journal 16 Exposition

Thousand years ago, there was a kingdom called Terandiphia, it was located in the deepest of the ocean, there were a lot of colorful carols around the palace, inside there, was living a mermaid called Antherina, she was the most powerful girl in the palace, she had a brother named Dylan, everything is nice and wonderful just like the day they had every single day.
One day there was a beautiful girl came to their palace, she was in all black, and smells terrible, she told Antherina she would destroy her palace for sure, and one day she would become the queen in the ocean, control all the things that Antherian had, they started to fight with each other, suddenly, she saw Dylan was standing besides that beautiful dark girl and said:" my dear sister i will beat  you until you dead, and the last word you said will be my name."
The dark girl started to fight, she took out a spear and try to attack her, Antherina keep dodging from the attack, suddenly, her brother punch her, and put a sword into her heart, and then she fell down, she clutched her brother and said " my soul will come back, and have a new revenge." and then she closed her eyes, everything became dark and smelly, the girl in black started to laugh, she laughed with a sharp voice, and everything became disgusting, she sat on the throne, and let all the things sleeping and withered.

Journal 15 Hip hop

                                                  I have twin sisters
                                               they are seven graders
                                        they have not learned about universe
                                   i think they only know how to use scissors.
                                          We usually have an argument
                                               When they are pissed
                                        I do not even know what they meant
                                       We do not really play with each other
                                       They always play the music they like
                            They love a song that is called "one way or another".
                       You probably cant recognize which one is elder or younger
                                         They usually wear white together
                                                   and have pony hair
                                                 wear a innocent smile
                                     and the girls you have saw over there
                                               probably are my sisters.



I am describing my sisters,and they are twins for sure, but actually they do not really only know how to use scissors, just want to describe them like they are childish and innocent, they are lovely sometimes, but most of the time, they are naughty and evil, they like to go outside and play hang out with their best friends, watching movies..and more,  to you, it might be very hard to recognize which one is which one, having a sister is cool even though they might be very noisy and annoying, but they might can be your best friend in your family.