Saturday, April 13, 2013

Journal 16 Exposition

Thousand years ago, there was a kingdom called Terandiphia, it was located in the deepest of the ocean, there were a lot of colorful carols around the palace, inside there, was living a mermaid called Antherina, she was the most powerful girl in the palace, she had a brother named Dylan, everything is nice and wonderful just like the day they had every single day.
One day there was a beautiful girl came to their palace, she was in all black, and smells terrible, she told Antherina she would destroy her palace for sure, and one day she would become the queen in the ocean, control all the things that Antherian had, they started to fight with each other, suddenly, she saw Dylan was standing besides that beautiful dark girl and said:" my dear sister i will beat  you until you dead, and the last word you said will be my name."
The dark girl started to fight, she took out a spear and try to attack her, Antherina keep dodging from the attack, suddenly, her brother punch her, and put a sword into her heart, and then she fell down, she clutched her brother and said " my soul will come back, and have a new revenge." and then she closed her eyes, everything became dark and smelly, the girl in black started to laugh, she laughed with a sharp voice, and everything became disgusting, she sat on the throne, and let all the things sleeping and withered.

1 comment:

  1. Wow! It's very excited story, and you described it very vitality. Especially the part that they were fighting with each other. Also how can a peaceful place became so disgusting!

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