The conflict in the story is men vs men, when the mysterious girl who is in black got to the palace and she wanted to control all the things that Antherina had, so they got a fight, from this i can tell that this is men vs men, they were try to fight with each other, and they both wanted to win this fight, and then Antherina figured out that his brother stood on the dark girl's side, she felt painful and sad, she was trying to think that should she fight with her brother, or she had to let it go, from here i also can tell that this is men vs self, because, the main character didn't know that what should she choose, she had to fight with her brother and kill him or she had to stand back and try not to hurt his brother, try not to fight with them.
Every story need conflicts, if there is no conflict in the story the story might be very boring and terrible, no one will want to read these kinds of book, the conflict is very important in the story, it can makes the story become more interesting and can create a different event in the story, let the character that set in the story trying to fix it, conflict is the most important part, always make the story more and more excited.
The character struggle on weather to fight with her brother or not. It also made reader felt the painful from the character. You had described the character's mood very detail. I can image the picture of the character were frown.
ReplyDeleteThis is a hard one, to decide to fight with the brother or not must be a dilemma for the main character. You did a great job on that, you made the reader feel the same way with the character. Hope can see your whole story, it must be really interesting.
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