Journal 28 My Tell-Tale Ending

The sound was getting louder and louder and louder.., "didn't they hear that? or they are just keep making jokes on me, oh my god, I think they probably knew this already, what should I do now? should I stand up?, should I confess? I don't know what should I do now" but he told himself to calm down, do not let himself looks so insane and terrible, he went and get some wine, and sat one the chair, he was trying to make the police leave his home, but they didn't even bother him, they kept drinking, talking and laughing, he couldn't stand anymore, he walked to his bedroom, grabbed some poison, and then he put it into a bottle of wine, he added more into polices' glass, the one he already put some poison in.
Suddenly every polices started shaking their body, they started to feel cold, and then they fall down, one by one by one, he started to laugh, he walked besides the window, and smiled, he let the wind brush his face, deep breath and then he jumped out of it...
He screamed and yelled, he found that he held his bed firmly, he opened his eyes, he found out that, it is just a creepy dream that he's never had.

Journal 27 Hints and Foreshadowing

In the story, the main character kept saying that he is nervous, especially when he killed the old man who with the pale blue eyes, he seems very calmly, he could calmly to tell the whole story, it makes him look insane and scary.
He could also hear the sounds that come from everywhere, even heaven and hell, the whole story makes me feel nervous and scared when i was reading it, and I cant really know that if he was talking a true story or he was just lying to everyone who was reading the story, I think its just all made by himself, he seems very scary and crazy, that's why it makes he become an unreliable narrator.
I havent read the books that has the unreliable narrators, but after reading this story, the unreliable narrators seems very cool, and he seems that he almost the main character in the story.

Journal 26 Unreliable Narrator

There are a lot of kinds of narrator, the one of my favorite kind is unreliable narrator, the unreliable narrators always make me feel excited, and very interested in the story, because they are usually very crazy and insane, they don't really even know what they are really doing and thinking, and they will keep lying to the readers.
I like to read the stories that is mystery, i think those stories are so cool, and of course, in the real world, there are a lot of unreliable person, sometimes its really hard to recognize that the it the person is saying the truth or not, sometimes i will think about the things that the person did before, if the person who likes to lie to everyone, then most of the stories and things that he says, people seldom will trust him, or maybe the person who always say the different kinds of things to different kinds of people.
I don't like the person like that in the real world, but i like to see them in the story, because most of the time they always make the story become very interesting and cool.

Journal 25 Scary Stories

Have you ever heard of any scary stories or thriller movie? I don't even dare to watch and read those things, those are so scary to me.
Im actually afraid of the dolls that with big eyes, the dolls are just same with the movie that is called "Child plays", the dolls inside are so scary, with a big blue and scary eyes, Im scared of those dolls when Im in the dark room alone, or see them at night, I feel so bad when someone is keep looking at me, and with a scary smile at night, makes me feel insecure.
There is one more reasons that why Im scared of the doll with big eyes, because I did hear the summary of the movie and the pictures of the movie too, so those things make me don't even dare to have one or look at them.
I have tried to accept the dolls like that before, I was trying to accept the things that I am scared of, but it is still too hard for me to accept that, this is the thing that I am really scared, how bout you?

Journal 24 Suspicion

Something that happened or the situation will make you feel strange and uncomfortable, it might let you want to get out of there.
If I be in the place, that is dark, and there are a few people are smoking and chewing some gums, with tattoos, and evil smile, also im alone, wind is keep brushing my face, no one looks nice and friendly there, and those people seems keep closing you, keep making a circle and try o surround you, I will defiantly feel so bad and want to get out of there, or maybe will scream as loud as i can.

sometimes the situation is very scary that you cant even imagine, those situation will make you keep shaking and feel very uncomfortable, like you are trying to get out of there, but it seems like it will be very hard to leave, even you try so hard to think the way to get out of there,and why the situation will make a person feel so bad, is because that, those people don't really look so normal, they smoke, have some tattoos, evil face, many different kinds of action will make a person get scared, especially when those people keep trying to close you and surround you, it must be the most scary part.

Journal 23 What's worth the effort?

I don't think that Squeaky thinks it's worth to take good care of his brother,Raymond,she might be very tired of keeping her eye on him,and have to keep protecting his brother, because, Raymond is often laughed by somebody, so she needs to stand out and protect him.
Especially the time when his brother Raymond makes some mistakes or got into some troubles, she has to help him and solve the problems that he makes, or she might be blamed by her parents, so she might often have to burden the sin that Raymond makes.
Just like my twin sisters, I have to take care of them,too, but this is a tired things to do, if you didn't help them or tell them to correct their mistakes, sometimes the person who will be blamed must be you, my sisters are naughty and childish, taking care of them is tired, but sometimes you will think it is not that tired, you can enjoy the course when you taking care of them, keeping eye on them might make you feel mad when they keep making mistakes, sometimes i don't think it is worth for me to do these things for them, but finally you will find out, everything isn't that worse.

Journal 22 The Resolution

Every things just died, all the plants and flowers never grown again,people started to cry,the mystery girl started to laugh out loud, her laughing just like a swamp witch, loud and sharp voice spread all over the ocean, Dylan just stood next to the mystery girl, and started to smile with a evil face.
All the people finally found out that the mystery girl and Dylan was Antherina's half-brother and sister, their mother was killed by Antherina's mother, her mother disagreed to have two queen in Terandiphia, she couldn't stand, so she made a trap and killed them.That's why they both hate Antherina so much, they wanted to kill her,to pay back,they thought someone must responded the death of their mother, even though they knew Antherina was innocent, but they didn't even care about this, the things that they realized is revenge  The mystery girl finally got the throne and the crown, they both got on the chair that they always dreamed to.
They hold their hands tightly and everything started to become dark and wither, the food and animals became smelly, the people in the town felt sleepy, they kept falling, one by one by one, the whole kingdom fall into sleep, it would never wake up, but there was still a flame in the woods
haven't be extinguished.

Journal 21 Falling Action

The fight was almost over, Antherina was attacked by the mystery girl who wore black,Antherina fall down, she couldn't even stand up again,the knife was pushed into her stomach.
She kept bleeding, her blood went through all the ground, flowers and plants were getting red, it was so scary that the people in the town kept crying,  her brother stood on her hand and said:"The last words that you said will be my name."
And then, Antherina couldn't even breath so well,she kept thrilling her body, she cant even stop shaking and her tears down, she still didnt understand why, she wanted to figure out what mistakes has she done to her brother, but she was running out of time, she wanted to figure out ,but everything was too late, Antherina was getting weaker and weaker, she wanted to stand up, but she couldn't even say a word, and her face was getting white,suddenly,she stop breathing, the things that surround her was getting more and more black, the plants and the flowers started to become smelly and disgusting,every things seems wold never be woken up.
The mystery girl started laughing, she got the throne and told all the people she would control the Terandiphia....

Journal 20 The Climax

Remember the part that have been stopped from?
Antherina was going to make a decision,the mystery girl was going to fight with Antherina,the princess of Terandiphia,suddenly she found out that her brother wasn't on her side,he was standing with the mystery girl,and they both just stared at Antherina, so she was trying to figure out what she should do. Finally, she got her own answer, she stood back and try not to start this fight, because she still owned a beautiful heart, she knew that her brother would still hurt her, even she just stood back, but in the deep of her heart, she doesn't really want to hurt her brother.
She wanted to do everything for not hurting his brother, she still remembered that her brother treated her like a little doll, always care about her, never let her cry, but she still couldn't understand that why he would be like this, he was not the boy that she knew before, she started to cry..
The fight started, a mystery girl took out her long sword and attacked her, she put the sword into Antherina's body and then pushed it into the deepest of her stomach, her brother came out and stood on her hand, told her that, the last word that she said would be his name....

Journal 19 My character

Antherina was the main character in my story, She had a long curly green hair, she got some beautiful jewels on the top of her hair, her cheek was red like an apple with big grey eyes, and a small mouth like a cherry,she couldn't live without style, she always wore yellow shirt, with some cute ribbons and some flowers on it, she had a mermaid tail, full of blue scales and green scales, her fin was purple, she always shook her fin, she must be very proud of it.
She is a nice and beautiful girl, she treated her people so well in her palace which called Terandiphia, her voice is wonderful, just like a bird singing on the branch, she smells like a red rose, when she was spinning around in the garden, the garden would be full of her smell.
She liked to help people, and she is nice to everyone, she listened to people's advice, took their advice, she had a beautiful heart.
She loved animals, she treated all the animals very nice, she often took care of them, also fed them when she was free, she was a lovely girl. And this is the introduction of my main character.

Journal 18 Rising Action

There was a mystery girl who wore a dark dress, appeared in the kingdom that called Terandiphia, it was a palace in the ocean, the mystery girl was trying to against the princess Antherina who controlled the palace in the ocean, the mystery girl wanted to knock the princess down, and then get the throne from the princess, at first, the Antherina wasn't afraid of her, she wasn't afraid of anything, she was a brave girl, until she found that her brother wasn't on her side, she saw that he just stood besides the mystery girl, and then kept staring at Antherina, her brother told her that he will beat her down and then told her that the last word that she said will be his name.
Antherina was shocked, she couldn't even believe that her brother would betray her,and hate her so much,so she became nervous,she didn't even know what should she do next,to her she didn't know what would be the right thing that she had to do, she was thinking about that she should fight with her brother and the mystery girl, or she had to stand back and try not to begin this fight?
What do you think she would do? Which one would she choose?

Journal 17 conflict

The conflict in the story is men vs men, when the mysterious girl who is in black got to the palace and she wanted to control all the things that Antherina had, so they got a fight, from this i can tell that this is men vs men, they were try to fight with each other, and they both wanted to win this fight, and then Antherina figured out that his brother stood on the dark girl's side, she felt painful and sad, she was trying to think that should she fight with her brother, or she had to let it go, from here i also can tell that this is men vs self, because, the main character didn't know that what should she choose, she had to fight with her brother and kill him or she had to stand back and try not to hurt his brother, try not to fight with them.
Every story need conflicts, if there is no conflict in the story the story might be very boring and terrible, no one will want to read these kinds of book, the conflict is very important in the story, it can makes the story become more interesting and can create a different event in the story, let the character that set in the story trying to fix it, conflict is the most important part, always make the story more and more excited.

Journal 16 Exposition

Thousand years ago, there was a kingdom called Terandiphia, it was located in the deepest of the ocean, there were a lot of colorful carols around the palace, inside there, was living a mermaid called Antherina, she was the most powerful girl in the palace, she had a brother named Dylan, everything is nice and wonderful just like the day they had every single day.
One day there was a beautiful girl came to their palace, she was in all black, and smells terrible, she told Antherina she would destroy her palace for sure, and one day she would become the queen in the ocean, control all the things that Antherian had, they started to fight with each other, suddenly, she saw Dylan was standing besides that beautiful dark girl and said:" my dear sister i will beat  you until you dead, and the last word you said will be my name."
The dark girl started to fight, she took out a spear and try to attack her, Antherina keep dodging from the attack, suddenly, her brother punch her, and put a sword into her heart, and then she fell down, she clutched her brother and said " my soul will come back, and have a new revenge." and then she closed her eyes, everything became dark and smelly, the girl in black started to laugh, she laughed with a sharp voice, and everything became disgusting, she sat on the throne, and let all the things sleeping and withered.

Journal 15 Hip hop

                                                  I have twin sisters
                                               they are seven graders
                                        they have not learned about universe
                                   i think they only know how to use scissors.
                                          We usually have an argument
                                               When they are pissed
                                        I do not even know what they meant
                                       We do not really play with each other
                                       They always play the music they like
                            They love a song that is called "one way or another".
                       You probably cant recognize which one is elder or younger
                                         They usually wear white together
                                                   and have pony hair
                                                 wear a innocent smile
                                     and the girls you have saw over there
                                               probably are my sisters.



I am describing my sisters,and they are twins for sure, but actually they do not really only know how to use scissors, just want to describe them like they are childish and innocent, they are lovely sometimes, but most of the time, they are naughty and evil, they like to go outside and play hang out with their best friends, watching movies..and more,  to you, it might be very hard to recognize which one is which one, having a sister is cool even though they might be very noisy and annoying, but they might can be your best friend in your family.

Journal 14: Slang

People using their different kinds of words to conversation with the people who can understand what is talking about,especially the teenager, they always use some slang to chat with their friends online,or using every single place when they meet each other.
for example like "AFK" often be used on the internet when chatting,it means "away from keyboard" sometimes if you going to leave for a moment and you also can use "BRB" it means "be right back" it will be very quick to type out the things that you wanna say and explain,oh and of course "wanna" is "want to" when you say out these two words kind of  fast,it will be like "wanna".
slang is full of everywhere, and it is very easy to understand,and use them,i think using slang is kind of cool between teenagers ,when we are typing words we also makes the words that you have to type out shorter,like when we are chatting online,we often makes "you" to "u",or "are" into "r".
but i think it will still cause some bad effect,like when i was writing the letter or essay on my computer,i usually cant stop myself to type out the slang,because its normal to type slang, so when i was typing some important and formal things, it will keep typing the slang on.
it is easy to understand and use but we should still remember that the original words,and do not type those slang on the formal file.

Journal 13 My style

Cool style full or every single place I don't really think that Im that kind of style.
I always laugh out and something that might not very funny but I still can laugh for 30 seconds.
I like to make friends and im an outgoing girl,i like to talk to people and play with them. it will make me feel great,almost everything that around me can make me feel happy and funny.
Im totally not a nerd,i don't really like to study text books it makes me feel sleepy,but i love to read some cool novels..like Percy Jackson..and more.
I like to listen to music when i was walking sleeping eating or do anything else,i like to do things with music, especially pop music.
i don't have my own style when i am deciding something, i always look around and then check out do anyone choose the same thing with me,and then i can finally make my decision.
i often follow other people's steps, i always need a sample put in front of me.i think i will keep working on the style to be more dogmatic and make your own decisions without any other people's sound. i think i gotta change my part of style about that.

Journal 12 List poem

Take a sheet of paper on your desk

You also need a easel for your paint

Use your pencils for the sketch

If you draw wrong please erase

Use your markers or some pens

Trace the contour on your sketch

Take out your brushes

And then take out your palette

Put some ink and pigment on it

Hope you will get some fun on it


 

Journal 11 My list

brushes

pencils

pens

markers

a sheet of paper

pigment

erasers

palette

ink

bruin

easel

Journal 10 Acrostic

Villager in the little corner of the world.
Ice cream is her favorite.

Vivi is her lovely name.
Innocent smile is not her style.

Welcome everyone to be her friends.
Especially the people with warm hearts.
Nothing can stop her to get her target. 

Girl often with a smile probably is her.

Catch your eyes to look at her.

Have a wonderful voice.

Especially her charming eyes.

Reveal true nature from her every songs.

Lead us to her singing world.

Let us enjoy the songs with her.

Oath is one of her songs.

Young age but popular.

Desire to be the best singer.

Journal 9 introduction to me

Hi guys, I'm Vivi Weng, and you guys must realize who am I, you just ask me why? oh...em for no reason, anyway, I'm going to introduce myself, so listen carefully.
I have a medium eyes,my eyeballs are a little bit brown, I have black curly hair, and Im a short girl, not very fat and also not very slim,I have 5 people in my lovely family,two annoying sisters (they are twins) ,mother, father and me.
I like to watch some action movies, painting and listen to music,those things are easy for me to kill time, and I don't really like to go shopping ,because I don't like to keep walking and walking and walking.
And i have been to America twice,Japan once and China once, and when im getting older i want to go to France, because I love the ambiance there I think it is a place that full of romanticism.
Wait, you're asking me why Im writing these stuff here? oh let me tell you something, I hope that the people who is reading can know who am I and more information from me,I like to make friends and sharing things to each other, and I like to write something in my blogger,let the people who is reading can realize more about me and my story.
Now, do you want to be my friends? Great, take a number plate, find a seat and stand in line and maybe the next round will be your turn.

journal 8 My confict

my conflict At school,everyone has their different talents,everyone has their different ways to get better on their own grades. Actually,I'm not really good at algebra and I don't really got a good grade on it,sometimes the math problems are too hard for me to understand what is the descriptions are trying to tell me,so I always feel bad when I get the mark test or doing the math problems. Every time the tests returned back ,I should handed to my mom,and my mom would always be like "the girl who always sits next you often gets good grades on the tests then why can't you get the same score as she gets?" She always ask me and compare me with other people ,and I hate that kind of feeling,everyone isn't good at the same thing ,some people is bad at English but some people are very good at English,there are many different way and different things that people are good at. I'm bad at math,but I get good grades on other subjects,no one is good at the same kinds of things,I just want to be myself.

Journal 7 three rats

Three rats Once upon a time,there was three little mice lived together in the kitchen of a family,they always came out at midnight and getting some cheese to eat,day by day, three little mice were getting bigger,they just became three big rats. One day,the biggest one suggest that maybe we should have our own place,we couldn't always stay together. other two rats agreed with the first rat. The next day,they began to find their own places,the first rat found a glass bottle and ran into it very fast,the second one found a plastic bowl,because he thought it is great enough,and the third one,he found a pot which made with metal. They began to start their own life, unfortunately,the family the lived in brought a big cat home,they was so nervous about it. The day they were afraid of was coming,the big cat walked into the kitchen and find something to eat,and then it found a glass of water,but the first rats was just living in there! so the cat push the glass and it fall down to the floor. And then she is keep finding a bowl that she can put some water in it,she found a plastic bowl that the second rat lived,so the cat scratched the bowl and the it just separated the cat wasn't going to give up,and keep finding a pot that can put some fodder in it,it found a pot that the third rat lived in,the cat used its all strength to get the pot down but that's to heavy to get it ,finally the cat given up and back to sleep,at last the third rat stay in the metal pot,oh no no no the other two rat were inside the pot too,when their places was destroyed,they stayed in the pot with the third rat and finally they were happy after ever.

Journal 6 Analogy

Analogy Studying is just like walking on the stares, its hard to step on the first stares. Just like studying, everything for me is all new and never seen it before, so when i get inside to learn all the things, that is getting more difficult to do it. If the stares you step on is getting more and more higher, all the things that you learned will be more easier for you to understand, because you are not a newbie for studying anymore. You can catch the points from the book more easily, and get your own study habbits to help yourself on studying.

Journal 5 Fighting words

                                                                    Fighting words

How can some words or sentences start serious fights?
There was one time at school, classmates and I were playing some games during the break time,we were having fin then,until a boy came here .
He always liked to bully people and shout at people and he couldnt even stop himself to stop doing those bad things. He couldnt really control his emotion.
And he came besides us and keep saying some bad words,and doing dirty actions, ofcourse we were getting mad then,then we got into a fight.
We keep pushing each other,yelling,shouting and I felt somebody punched my face very hard,and I was just cried out.
After that, teacher told us to stay in her office,and she blamed us for a while,then let us leave.
I got a lesson,when you get into some events that you couldnt handle it well,and dont solve it by yourself,you can ask any other people's help,it will better than get into a silly fight.

Journal 4 Ooops !

                                                                           Ooops!

Ooops! can use in the many different,when i say Ooops it means i already did something wrong.There is another way how people said Ooops!

Our class had a transfer student,and to most of the students,they thought that her personality is kind of
weird,she didnt like to say any words,and walked like a duck, basically,no one likes to talk to her or play
with her.
There was one time,we were having lunch at school then,there was some girls hate the transfer student very much and for no reason,just because she was weird and freeky,so they tried to bully her or laughed at her together,so they tried to do something to her.
They always put some dirty stuff and drew some ugly pictures on her own desk,when everyone was lining up,and those girls would pushed her away and said"Ooops! I didnt mean it." and then wore a creepy smile to her.
Sometimes Ooops not just a sounds when you did something wrong or mess up something, it also can uses on purpose, it can be many different way,but this way I told today,thats really mean.

ESL II journal 3 below the surface

                                                              below the surface

I was in 5 grade then, in our class, we all have a very good relationship,but except one girl,she wass very silent,and didnt usually talk in class,just did her own thing and stay in her own seat.
First time i saw her,I just didnt want to close to her,because i thought there wont be any consensus between she and I.
There was a game we should grouping,but we couldnt choose by ourselves,so the teacher just grouping for us,and I saw that I got to stay with that girl in a group,and Im thinking that oh come on,I got nothing to talk with her.
When the game started I saw she is keep smiling at me,and i smiled at her too.
After the game,she just came and stand besides,and talked to me,gradually,I founded that she liked painting very much and we got the same interesting.
Now I figure out that we should know the person by ourselves,we cant just saw her,and say that we wont have any consensus forever,if you try to know someone you dont really stay with everyday,maybe you can find out something new.

Journal 2 : Effort?

When I was a little girl , I just only thought about playing and having some entrtainment, I didn't even think about anything about my future and ambition, when I'm getting older and older , I started to think about what should I do,or what do I want to be in the future.
When Im in 3rd grade, Im interested in english because I got good grades on it,so it made me feel like I can do it better, and i just kept working hard on it.
Im not really good at algebra and science, but I can get better score on languages, from then on,Im very interested in languages,and pronounce those words.
Until now,I am just keep working on it,no one push me to do it,just because I want to make it well,and I think it can be very helpful for my own future,like getting in to a company,maybe languages can make something become more easier to get your target.