The fight was almost over, Antherina was attacked by the mystery girl who wore black,Antherina fall down, she couldn't even stand up again,the knife was pushed into her stomach.
She kept bleeding, her blood went through all the ground, flowers and plants were getting red, it was so scary that the people in the town kept crying, her brother stood on her hand and said:"The last words that you said will be my name."
And then, Antherina couldn't even breath so well,she kept thrilling her body, she cant even stop shaking and her tears down, she still didnt understand why, she wanted to figure out what mistakes has she done to her brother, but she was running out of time, she wanted to figure out ,but everything was too late, Antherina was getting weaker and weaker, she wanted to stand up, but she couldn't even say a word, and her face was getting white,suddenly,she stop breathing, the things that surround her was getting more and more black, the plants and the flowers started to become smelly and disgusting,every things seems wold never be woken up.
The mystery girl started laughing, she got the throne and told all the people she would control the Terandiphia....
Vivi:
ReplyDeleteWhy the lovely gril just died by such the marble things! It’s really unexpected, because most of writer won’t let the protagonist died this fast. Although they can be rebirth. It's very special style!
-Peggy Hsieh
Vivi:
ReplyDeleteI love the falling action, you made the story terrific but also attractive. It's heart-broken when I read the part about Antherina's brother. Good job!
Amber Lin