The sound was getting louder and louder and louder.., "didn't they hear that? or they are just keep making jokes on me, oh my god, I think they probably knew this already, what should I do now? should I stand up?, should I confess? I don't know what should I do now" but he told himself to calm down, do not let himself looks so insane and terrible, he went and get some wine, and sat one the chair, he was trying to make the police leave his home, but they didn't even bother him, they kept drinking, talking and laughing, he couldn't stand anymore, he walked to his bedroom, grabbed some poison, and then he put it into a bottle of wine, he added more into polices' glass, the one he already put some poison in.
Suddenly every polices started shaking their body, they started to feel cold, and then they fall down, one by one by one, he started to laugh, he walked besides the window, and smiled, he let the wind brush his face, deep breath and then he jumped out of it...
He screamed and yelled, he found that he held his bed firmly, he opened his eyes, he found out that, it is just a creepy dream that he's never had.
Vivi:
ReplyDeleteThat is not a bad ending, you let the ending become a horrible dream from the narrator, which is very creative, because the other people just write he kill all the people, you are different that the other, good.
Isaac Yu
Vivi:
ReplyDeleteHe might be very fortunate that it’s only a dream. He didn’t killed anyone in the end. Or maybe he is still crazy, so he though it’s only a dream?
-Peggy Hsieh