There was a mystery girl who wore a dark dress, appeared in the kingdom that called Terandiphia, it was a palace in the ocean, the mystery girl was trying to against the princess Antherina who controlled the palace in the ocean, the mystery girl wanted to knock the princess down, and then get the throne from the princess, at first, the Antherina wasn't afraid of her, she wasn't afraid of anything, she was a brave girl, until she found that her brother wasn't on her side, she saw that he just stood besides the mystery girl, and then kept staring at Antherina, her brother told her that he will beat her down and then told her that the last word that she said will be his name.
Antherina was shocked, she couldn't even believe that her brother would betray her,and hate her so much,so she became nervous,she didn't even know what should she do next,to her she didn't know what would be the right thing that she had to do, she was thinking about that she should fight with her brother and the mystery girl, or she had to stand back and try not to begin this fight?
What do you think she would do? Which one would she choose?
Vivi:
ReplyDeleteI don't know what will she do! But I am very much want to know what will she do, why the dark girl want to fight with her and why his brother didn’t stand on her side. And I believe that Antherina will make the best choice.
- Peggy Hsieh
Isaac:
ReplyDeleteWow this is a good conflict, you tell us very clear about the conflict you write, and you also describe the feeling of the character in your paragraph, that is not a poor effort. Well done.